your thoughts on this tshirt

so I designed another tshirt.. i think it sucks

but i figured i'd get some outside opinion on it, and the quote (which I made up..)

it's for my sister for christmas she plays violin she's 20... any critiques, bashing, is all welcome.

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my friend made this one http//www.threadless.com/submission/97626/symphonetic

it's undergoing voting right now D

Yours looks pretty cool too

[quotebab6227dd6="EatChex89"]so I designed another tshirt.. i think it sucks

but i figured i'd get some outside opinion on it, and the quote (which I made up..)

it's for my sister for christmas she plays violin she's 20... any critiques, bashing, is all welcome.

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Wow, that's good actually. I think she'll like it because you made it for her.

Yours is also cool unknown uchiha, very creative.

It's not mine, my friend made that one lol

i think its homo chex. but ill be homo for you.

[quote22c4e80d42="kdollar"]i think its homo chex. but ill be homo for you.[/quote22c4e80d42]

well i'm not gonna be the one wearing it, lol

The design is good, but the phrase (quote, etc.) is a little too corny and cliche. Also, it doesn't flow well. It seems the quote should end at "...it appears on the inside." I have a suggestion....maybe something like "The [i15fd4aa7e0]real[/i15fd4aa7e0] magic of music appears in the hearts of your listeners." or something to that effect. I know it's still a little corny, but it flows better than the sentence you have. Let me know what you think....

Can i have her phone number? Im gonna call her while she is sleeping and tell her i "meant to call someone else"

[quotec112ae3c61="Labtec-Jay"]Can i have her phone number? Im gonna call her while she is sleeping and tell her i "meant to call someone else"[/quotec112ae3c61]

ahahahaha... no.

[quotec112ae3c61="ajasax"]The design is good, but the phrase (quote, etc.) is a little too corny and cliche. Also, it doesn't flow well. It seems the quote should end at "...it appears on the inside." I have a suggestion....maybe something like "The [ic112ae3c61]real[/ic112ae3c61] magic of music appears in the hearts of your listeners." or something to that effect. I know it's still a little corny, but it flows better than the sentence you have. Let me know what you think....[/quotec112ae3c61]

i think i'll just find a music quote, but yea i was having problems with the quote too, your version is better.

Just make the quote something "internet cool" like
"Teh V10L1N ROXZORZ !!!!111!!!"
Or
"Rap isn't music"
Woah, I really want a big shirt that just says that, "Rap Isn't music, stop trying"

That'd be awesome! I'm going to make that

You'd probably get shot within 5 minutes in most cities roll

Haha, yea, but not in the suburbs my friend, not in the suburbs 8)